Good story, but I don't believe Newgrounds is the right place for this. I really wouldn't classify this as a movie. It was way too long and the transitions between text were way too drawn out. I also waited 12 minutes for a jump-scare that never came (to my relief). There are definately other places on the internet for this. Sorry, have to rate low.
I definately lol'd a little, you are fuckin' funny. Nicely done! 7/10 for you my friend.
Some kind of sound or SFx would have made it a bit more enjoyable.
I wanted to add sounds but my teacher said he would teach me that later.
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